Narrative Poems

Butterflies

I was ready!
Well I thought I was
I got butterflies in my stomach
And I suddenly got dizzy
I had to sit down
It was drawing closer and closer
Everybody was doing so well
I thought I would mess up
But my Mam told me to go for it
So I did
I was really happy at where I came
The advice really worked!
by Katie Cleere, 6^th Class.   

 Going to my Uncles House
Me and Daddy went to my uncle’s farm
One Saturday morning
At 9 o clock.

He has horses.

We had to clean out stables.

The dumper truck is very dangerous
So I listened to my uncle.
We put the horses’ dirt into the dumper truck
Carefully.
By Cormac Maher, Fifth Class

The Advice

Before the match
I was wallowing in tears
My father came into the room

He asked  

Whats wrong?

And I said
I feel I’m not good enough to start
He said if you try and believe…
I felt better after that.
 by Jack Kealy, Sixth Class

The Good Advice 
When I was having a problem
Jumping my horse,
I didn’t know what to do,

My dad was watching me

So I rode over to him
And asked him what to do.

He told me to squeeze with my legs

And to hold on to the mane.
And the next time round, I made it!
 
I got off my horse and patted her.
I brought her in for a treat,
I was very proud of her.

It was good advice.
By Claire Egan, 5^th Class

The Night Before Training

One day

It was March

It was the night before training.

I was scared

It was my first night of traning

I was scared of hitting a sliotar

Then mammy gave me some advice

I felt confident

Then I went traning

I had a fun time

I wasn’t scared any more

It was better that way too.

 By Molly Behan, Fifth Class

 

 

Tidy, Tidy, Tidy

It was a nice Tuesday morning

I had to tidy my room,

But of course I didn’t want to.

So Mammy told me,

Not to put everything under my bed

And to put everything where it belongs.

So I did

And it didn’t take as long as I thought,

It was quicker than stuffing everything under my bed.

So I said

“Thank you Mammy

The advice you gave me really worked”.

By Sarah Walton, 5^th Class

Piano Trouble

One night when I was in my room,

I started to play my piano,

I played all my songs...

But one

It was the hardest song I had.

Mammy came in and told me

‘If I stay at the song I would like it.’

I thought it would not work,                                   

But I still tried it,

When I started it I thought I would never like it,

But now it is my favourite song.

by Patrick Walton, 6^th Class

Football Match

On January 17th we beat the Commons in a football challenge match. We played in the Ballingarry pitch. It was 7 a side and 20 mins a side. We won by a lot but it was just for fun. It was the first football match our school played in 10 years. Our referee was Philip Ivors. We had a training a session afterwards.
by Caoimhe Ivors, 5th Class

Lambert Puppet Theatre

The Lambert Puppet Theatre came to our school on the 19th of December.The play they were doing was Goldilocks and the Three Bears. The play was very well done. The play was well thought out. Goldilock's hair was blond the bears' fur was brown. At the start there were two finger puppets called Pick and Boo. The younger classes really enjoyed the show .
 by Zoe Maher, 6th class